by divona 14th May 2008 1:43 pm

Dear Mike! i think idea is nice however there are some flows in the text that make the all idea humm...less powerful.for example:

Why in the first place i would think that people are "withholding from you" ? a man creates is own reality meaning it is the person himself witholding from himself reflected on the others he knows.
Also the "doing" to "feel better"- there is nothing to "do" to feel better- if you have to "do" to feel better
with the advise to fake it in order to make it real afterwards as an "inertia" movement-it does not make any sense.Also to give in order to receive...real giving is comes without thinking so much,if i have to make all the calculations you mention at the top of page it seems you are saying-note that is good giving because you get it back? and also i see you sell things at your site-are you telling me you are advertising your bussiness at spiritlibrary?!i do not know Mike, if you are serious about your intentions i think you should reconsider the text a bit...good luck
Divona

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